Practise 11 Writing strong thesis staments

1. government surveillance

disagree 

they are conrolling us

they have information of ourselves 

they throw the money away with things they do not really need 

2. gun ownership 

disagree

you can kill somebody and you do not have the fault

it is something crazy to have agun in a house

it is very dangerous if there are children 

3. Globalization 

agree

it is a good way for  mix some cultures 

it is great that everybody can buy and go everywhere they want 

a good way to learn, investigate, and advanced, etc. 

4. changing your name

you can choose a name that you like more 

if you want to remake your life because you had had differents problems

you want to go out and do not know your real name 

Governant disorder 

They are controlling us at any time whenever they want. They have some private information. They throw the money away in things that really are not important. 

Gun ownership 

The people who own some differents types of guns in tehri home are a very dangerous, because they can kill somebody and they are not balme of it. But even have one in a house is crazist thing to have if you have children.  

Globalization is a good way for mix some cultures and have some influencesof some of them. Although is great that everybody have the opportunity to buy and go whereever they want, or live.  Even, is a good way to learn a language, to comunitate with other countries, also has helped to investitage some things and help to advance the society.   

Changing your name is an opportunity to choose another one that you like more. Even it is a good chance if you want to remake your life, or if you want taht everybody know your real name.

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