Practise 8 Analysis of a ted talk and my opinion paragraph
What’s the topic of the TED talk? What’s the main idea? When does the speaker introduce his idea? How?
Topic: education and creativity
Controlling idea: creativity is as important as intelligence Public schools
4 paragraphs
1ª full creativity and explaining the children made mistakes and it’s not a problem
Personal experiences statidis examples
Quotation: Pablo Picasso—abstracted art other aspect of art
2 paragraph: educational systems are the same all around the wold which is a pity. They all have anarchy
3 paragraph: the main aim of public education. Academic influence there are an institution that have their rules in the 19 century. The same subjects which are essential.
4 paragraph: Intelligence: diverse, dynamic and additional this is a fact, int
Conclusion: summary and restated the beginning. It’s a mix of both ways of conclusion.
Write an opinion paragraph about the video and why you agree or disagree.
Sir Ken Robinson makes many good points and many people should listen and follow his advice and opinion. I believe the conclusion he came to ought to be do it, so the educational system would be better for the children. Despite that, I hope many people would see this video and think about it. I believe this TED Talk is a great for the people who are interested in the education system and want to get it better for their children.
10:00-10:28 26/10/2021
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